This piece of yours endears me exceedingly. For a short piece, it was packed with a fine, metaphorical imagery and poignant thoughts.

An enjoyable read, as always! I gave it a 5/5! I hope you all the best and take care. ~Debbie

I visited your poem because you voted for me. It was just curiosity.

After reading it I’m leaving full of smth I cant explain. Reading and reading again, re-fining and still feel that theres something remained for me to understand. Probably only know what is really underneath these words.
It doesn’t matter if you used oxymoron or any other “hidden stuff”. Who cares about strict literature definitions?
This poem is great without any explication.

What a truly beautiful piece you have penned it ritely worden and meaning ful . Your talented ur work amazes me. Your words one can get lost in. The picture you paint for the minds eye is wonderful. Taking the reader to another place. dammm dis poem is all dat.