Comments : A Moment in Time

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Wow, this one is even better then your first one =D This one is amazing if you ask me =) I've been finding a lot of great poets tonight lols =D
    Another great poem and another well deserved 5 =) I look forward to more from you ^_^
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by homebound

    Wow...and again you did amazing! I love your style in this one...repeating the phrase "Within a moment" really puts forth the idea.
    ~Love and Trust