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by deathdealer Jun 10, 2007
Dark, fantasy /
DESIRE TO KILL
you feel that chill?
that intent to kill
you know he's there
with his knife he'll rip
the splatter of blood
that feeling so good
how he longs for it
he tears them to peices ,bit by bit
he yearns to be free
when killing he yells with glee
you realise he'll kill us all too
when looking in the mirror all that can be seen
Wow that is cool. i like this poem such a cool meaning. xxx
An interesting poem- though I don't believe I've ever had the desire to kill anyone before.. :)) I suppose that could be a tiny glimpse of it, once again you did a great job.
Whoa! very dark and deep poem...i write some like this but yours is just amazing..i loved it...5/5
That was awesome dude...excellent truly excellent...kepp up the great work =)
Wow very expressive.loved it well done