Desire to kill

by deathdealer   Jun 10, 2007


DESIRE TO KILL

you feel that chill?
that intent to kill
you know he's there
with his knife he'll rip
he'll tear

the splatter of blood
that feeling so good
how he longs for it
he tears them to peices ,bit by bit

he yearns to be free
when killing he yells with glee
you realise he'll kill us all too
when looking in the mirror all that can be seen
is you...

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  • 9 years ago

    by Cassie

    Wow that is cool. i like this poem such a cool meaning. xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Chemistry

    An interesting poem- though I don't believe I've ever had the desire to kill anyone before.. :)) I suppose that could be a tiny glimpse of it, once again you did a great job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Whoa! very dark and deep poem...i write some like this but yours is just amazing..i loved it...5/5

    ~michelle~

  • 10 years ago

    by purplified

    That was awesome dude...excellent truly excellent...kepp up the great work =)

  • 10 years ago

    by lisa

    Wow very expressive.loved it well done