The rythem in this poem is very good.... And this poem is sad... I am sorry your woman passed in 1983... I know that's gotta still until this day be hard to deal with... :(... Wow... You are a natural poet... keep on writing!!! Thank you for the comment about my latest poem.. Yes, a woman I had a crush on, was close with just recently passed, and I just found out this past week.... I went to her grave twice... I miss her so much... Well hey, I gotta head to work , but I love your poem..keep writing!! 5/5

Great poem, sad, but very well written great job and sorry about your lost I know it hurts , good luck and drop by sometimes, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Go phil! that was really good, I could feel the pain in the poem, and it made me consider my life, and how it's not that bad, so thank you. great job :)

Hmmmm thats really sad :[

and i certainly was wat u used to be :P

i loved to comment and then i wrote this one poem..

and then it kinda came pouring out

you know :P

one of those days :]

its better than my first one too lol

but i do hope you keep writing

Nice poem Phil. I've never exactly gone through what you did, but pain is pain everywhere you go.Please do keep writing, it helps....a lot....a lot a alot.

It's absolutely a beautiful piece of a lost love. The feelings and emotions employed on this work endear me completely. I further see it as some sort of ballad, and yet I wish you could've go on and on...
Still, it's a lovely, bittersweet write. Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.

A beautiful, sad poem.
I'm sorry for your lost, it must be really hard.
Like the words, everything.

" her spirit lives on in a beautiful white dove "

Beautiful line.
Take care

This is beautifully written...very moving...I particularly loved the imagery you created in the last few lines...created very vivid pictures for me.

Awwwwwww love it great job!=]

* $heila *

I really like this poem! It's beautiful!

This poem is beautiful.
Horribly sad but beautiful all the same.

And u let me a comment that said u weren't a poet... if that doesn't prove ur a poet, idk wat does. if ur able 2 write something like that out, ur strong, real strong.

great write. keep it ^^^!

.:Katelyn:.