Excellent write and oh so true, great job, keep it up, your friend Tracy dean. 5/5

Awh, wow, I really liked this. It was so simple yet the meaning were so powerful. It flowed well and the rhymes all worked. The vocabulary you used perfectly conveyed what you were trying to say and all in all i would say an excellent poem. 5/5

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Very nice way to put it....