Comments : In an altered State of Consciousness

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    I loved this poem. I have an old one with a title similar to this one, but it was about actual drugs. I like this one better though. And I can trulyyyy relate to it. Never stop writing! 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 16 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    I loved it!! very talented are we!? hehe =]]. by the looks of your poems you have a lot of passion for poetry. <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Another outstanding piece. I loved the beautiful rhymes in this one. Its great and the flow is flawless. 5/5 u owe for this.