Once

by Tracy D Rollings   Jun 13, 2007


Once in your life
true love comes by
takes you to new heights
can't explain why.

It hits you hard
and leaves it's marks
toy's with your heart
starts a few sparks.

Your friends give warning
but you just ignore
fall even deeper than
then it hurts you more.

Now you sit here
wondering what went wrong
love just walked out
left you all alone.

See love is blind
that we all know
without that special someone
it will never grow.

Hearts always get broken
never care how you feel
knowing scars they leave
won't ever really heal.

Now that I learned
that love grows cold
and sits long enough
gets covered with mold.

So love for me
will be forever gone
ripped my heart out
left me all alone.©2007 Tracydr42

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  • 16 years ago

    by Charbel

    What a really good poem , your poem structure is very good and your stanzzas are small which make it very easy to read and understand , 9/10

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, very nice poem. It is sad and i can relate to it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robyn

    This was really great!
    robyn xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Bob

    Great poem - you have a nice way of settling the reader into the flow.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mary Rose

    Gosh u rily r good n poetry... >_< 5/5