This is more like a love/ life poem, its very good, love the way it goes, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming joe!!!

This is a nice poem although it's a bit contrary to my own opinion and my poem entitled dreams are not real... anyway, i give it 5/5 great job

Thats really nice one!!!

God bless u

Short bu brilliant all the same..gr8 write u have here!!
keep up the gr8 work...tk care bree

Excellent poem , wonderfully written and so very true, anything and everything is possible if you put your mind to it and heart in it, great write Joe, you did a wonderful job this one, thanks for sharing ,,,,, your friend Tracy d.............5/5

I truly enjoyed the last stanza for the key to our success in life is summed up there.
May we all come to know and believe in that whole heartedly!
Thanks for the nice read Joe!

Your words are true, but sometimes you can put al your effort in and still come up empty.
It takes two to tango...

5/5 Ingrid

I don't believe in love at first sight and I don't like how you wrote first stanza. Second is very positive and third has incredible atmosphere. Message of whole piece is wonderful. I enjoyed in it.

This is a beautiful and powerful piece.
I love the message portrayed, so sweet
and true. The last stanza is a major turn-key
to success. Wonderfully penned. Keep it up.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

I really liked it becaus eit was so true. i love peoms that just talks about real life and not fluff.

I think this poem works out well in itself! 5/5

I really like this poem, the message jumps out and grabs you by the scruff of the neck. You can do anything in life and love so long as you commit fully!
Great message, nicely done.
5/5

Love at first sight, eh? I never believed in it before but maybe I will now...LOL

I love inspirational writes like this....beautiful stuff!!!!!

This one made me smile. Although I was expecting something completely different. I liked it. The last stanza almost blew me away. I have no idea why, but it was just beautiful. So emotion filled. A beautifully penned write. Great job. 5.5

Amber :]]

I love this poem for I love hope and its true 5/5 Im doin your deal

Wow this poem although short still managed to really make me stop and think. It sounds like you took a quote and then just turned it into a poem. I really liked this peice of yours simply because it was very different from what I normally read. The flow was wonderful, short and sweet. Just reading it made my eyes sparkle way to go.