Comments : Hoping You Won't See

  • 10 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Wonderfully written poem ,great flow wording was great, this is a very sad poem, be I loved it. amazing the way your mind thinks so much like mine, great job, keep it up, your friend Tracy dean
    5/5 p. s drop in and check out a few of my poems sometimes

  • 10 years ago

    by Maria

    I love it...it is just like what I am going through..so...jus so u no...ur not alone..lol..

  • 10 years ago

    by June

    I loved reading this ,as i can relate to it ,brilliantly wrote ,well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Beautiful poem ...... i could feel the emotion ..... well penned ..... 5/5

    keep it the great writting

    Chan
    -xx-

  • 10 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Amazzing poem girly, you put so much emotion and meaning behind it a deffinite 5/5 <33

  • 10 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    I really like your poems that i've read so far

  • 10 years ago

    by Sensual Butterfly

    Wonderfully written! This is one of those poems that I believe everyone can relate to at least once in their life times. Excellent

  • 9 years ago

    by Megan

    I lovee this poem. How it some how triggers a strong emotion in the people who read . Now that's a poem =]]

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy Miller

    I love this piece..very well written. It fits into my life to a tee.
    Keep up the good work.

  • 9 years ago

    by Becca

    That was really beautiful. Very relatable. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    I really like the emotion in this poem and I like the structure of rhyming couplets. Great write :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy Miller

    Wow! I love this piece....and kinda feeling your words today
    Good job!!!!