That got really intense. Again, it was written very well, and I could just imagine everything that was played out in this. A great continuation with an added twist. You're very good at writing this sort of topic. You should do it again sometime. I'd be sure to read it. Well done. I really enjoyed reading it.

Tammie

I thought this was good. Great twist.. You should right more on this subject. Or any type of Explicit poems your very good at it..

Wow what a present. Amazing dear. I enjoyed fully n the story in this poem is outstanding. 5/5 dear

Wow i liked the continuation good work you should write more on this topic! i woud definatly read it!

No offense or anything but just wondering....ru bisexual or a lesbian? or just straight? I dont mean anything by it I was just wondering..by the way your story was HOTT!!

I'm bisexual.
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I will write more when I can.

Hmmm crazy sex. I lovd the story.

I wish i could get a birthday present like that :x
5/5.

Hmmm crazy lesbians! well i don't like it.

Wow wow wow
even better than the 1st part
=]
.x

I want that present:D..that was awesome! im so wet right now!

Wow....i love it. it got me in da mood. lol its good. keep it up

That was awesome you need to write more

Did this really happen?