Comments : Reflection in Crystal Clear Water [child abuse sux ]

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem is so sad.i can relate to it very well.

    My tears trickle in the water, looking at the girl
    The girl is in peril, my heart bleeds for her
    I sought to help her but nothing I could do

    That evil face burned into my eyes,
    He came and beat the girl, she cries
    Wishing to be save from that evils hand

    He strikes her once, He strikes her twice
    He strikes the poor girl until shes down
    Another little angel inflicted with pain

    this stanza brought tears to my eyes.
    keep up the good work.
    5/5
    hope we stay in touch.
    best wishes
    take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Jemma

    So sad, and well written.
    It was very moving.
    Keep writing.