Guys, I truely loved this poem. I found it to be really sweet holding such emotions which you both portrayed beautifully to form such a great poem, with a unique and creative idea. The first line of each stanza was interesting I loved how you set it up and it got counted down. Also the ryhme was great, simple yet so effective. Well done guys you have worked well together on this one. ~mel

Wow! thats really good. the rhythem and flow is perfect. both of you did a wonderful job writing this! 5/5

xo kisses xo

I am amzed this had my heart racing faster and fater i could feel IT...it was liek nothign iv read..and i think this is the longesst comment iv wrote... 5/5

LimeGreenShadowOnTheWall

This was so beautifully written..Congrats to the both of you for writting such an excellent peice. 5/5....

This poem was beautiful!!!!

I definetly liked these lines the best v

30 seconds till your kiss
These things are running through my mind
I'm not ready to let go
And leave these memories behind

But the rest was ((amazing)) too!
Beautiful flow.~
Great word choice~
LOVED IT!! :D:D

This poem was superb.
love the way you have written it.
the flow was over well written.
5/5
best wishes
and take care
emmeline

and thank you for your comment.

Wowowow.
amazingggg poem. you two did an oustanding job.
"weve" < we[[`]]ve
other than that one minor mistake, this was a wonderfulll poem.
great emotion. i loved the idea of it, as well. plus the ending.
keep it up you two. :]

Loved it the flow was great i love how it counted down the time emotion was good really great you two 5/5

I loved this poem
you guys did great on this one i think you thought that out very well i like the whole time sittuation iam years over due myself lol
keep up the good work

This is SUCH a beautiful poem girls.. the countdown thing was original and creative, it was refreshing to read a poem that was so beautiful and sad, while not so complicated..I loved it. Good work!! : )

This is a very awesome and interesting poem i like the way it's written especially the countdown stuff

This is very well done. I deffinetly know where you are coming from.

This is really really good.
Really well written =]
Welldone x

This is rele good ,, i liked how u used time,,
i liked this stanza the best:

"10 seconds till your kiss
And this truth is sinking in
It's time to choose a sidewalk
That doesn't lead to where weve been"

great job! 5/5
Janaynay

Wow this poem is excellent!!! i wasn't exspecting it to end the way it did...but when it did it gave me goosebumps:)...you obviously have talent ...not only is your poem unique but it really captures a lot of emotions....well keep up the good work your doing great!! 5/5