One Minute Over Due (collab)

Wow this poem is excellent!!! i wasn't exspecting it to end the way it did...but when it did it gave me goosebumps:)...you obviously have talent ...not only is your poem unique but it really captures a lot of emotions....well keep up the good work your doing great!! 5/5

I really like this. i think it's a great idea with the whole countdown thing. definately a 5/5. keep it up! =]

That was very nice. i liked it and it was cool how you counted down the seconds

Great poem. both of you, yet plz i found a mistake, you need to put a ' into it.

That doesn't lead to where weve been

we've* thats what you need. i loved how this counted down. and that the ending was so heart aching and sad. don't hold anything in. great message to go with a wonderful poem.

5/5 David

This is a very awesome and interesting poem i like the way it's written especially the countdown stuff