What if it hurts all over again..

by Lozbi   Jun 17, 2007


What if it hurts all over again

Her feelings are so much stronger
Even though she feels so much pain
She is falling for you all over,
Is it love again?

She is learning to let go,
Of her heartbreaking past
Shes scared of being hurt again,
After her last

She hopes you care for her
As much as you say you do
It would hurt her to lose you
After all shes been through

All she wants is to be happy,
Hopefully with you
Her past doesnt really matter,
As long as these feelings are true

Shes looking for happiness
Has she found it in you?
All she wants to say is,
She kinda loves you..

By Loren McCormack
6th April, 2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really loved this one. I can relate to all to well. I gave it a 5/5. Because you deserved it.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great poem, every stanza is well written. It has really good flow.
    You have one mistake: In second stanza "Shes" should be she's.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Aww this poem is so sweet =] at the beginning its sad, and i can feel the emotions just flowing right through your lines, then the final stanza just made me smile. hopefully you'll be happy =]
    nuff luv, keep writing xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Although the emotion is strong, and deep and the flow is good, I can only see one thing that could be improved, the shortcuts, should be taken out, it makes the poem easier to follow, and makes the flow better when you spell out the entire word, plus it looks more professional with the word spelled out. This is just a sugestion, the poem still reads great just the way you wrote it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Neta

    I like this one the most....
    its the one i can mostly relate to
    good job