HURT AT FIRST A LITTLE BIT
BUT NOW I'M SO OVER IT

hi laura!!!

Wow, um, i had to read this one a couple of times :s
but, nonetheless, it was very intriguing and into depth.
i absolutely loved your choice of words.
i shall add you to my favorites.
keep up the great work! :)
5/5

Another amazing poem, my fav lines were:

none of these words should be making any sense,
and if they do, you're over-evaluating.

so cynical i actually laughed out loud.

i noticed the last but one line said difficult rather than difficulty, but other than that a flawless piece that i could read forever.

You laura.. never fail to make my day.
your poetry, is.. smashing, nonetheless.

yes, i'm acting like a fag.
or maybe just trying to be a nice guy. [:

This was an intriguing poem. I didn't think I understood but I know I really did. I'm wierd like that you know. Well whatever, it was again very intriguing.

Pamela:)