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  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Naw this was so sweet and affectionate. it was so cute and the ending was like whoa! i loved this, i bet whoever you directed this will be very speechless and feel an urge of love.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    This is a great poem!!...the ending was especially good:D
    loved it!!
    hope to read more soon
    gr8 write
    breex

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    A great poem.. well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    I really loved this poem. I could feel the emotion. Well Penned! GREAT JOB!

  • 16 years ago

    by IfYouWantMe

    I love the last line!

    the things we can't have
    are the things we want most

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    A unique kind of poem, i love it...and i guess you are right "but maybe that's just it: the things we can't have
    are the things we want most "

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    This was great. Beautiful. You are a great writer. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very strong poem and beautifully well written. Great Job ingrid. You are a good writer, you should get your poems published and i will be the first one to buy them. Take care.

    -The little one...

  • 15 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Ingrid, your words are very true in every syllable you've put on. And I am glad that you have decided to take us through a divine journey of your most beautiful works. :) And I thank you for your kind comment on our collab, much appreciated and I give the compliments back, sevenfold. :)

    Take care!

    Hugs,

    Bri~

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I love how your poem started off describing a relationship and a person that made you feel a certain way than you twisted it to be a ghost or spirit and you were right to say what we desire is not what we can have
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well written Ingrid a rather melancholy poem, and so true as well sometimes it seems the harder we try the more difficult it is to get what we want

    Grant