Locked Away Misery

by skynerraw   Jun 17, 2007


Broken hearted, feeling betrayed
All of these feelings coming that were delayed
Crying for him, crying for your life
Wishing that you could find the damn knife
First thinking of the guy with your heart
But his love for me is hiding somewhere in the dark
Then to your friend that stabbed you in the back
Wishing she was here so you could attack
Then of your bestie, who defended the girl
Saying it was a misunderstanding, calling her a pearl
Then of your father, who is a stupid jerk
A lazy idiot who will never work
Then of your animals, that disappeared without a sound
Wishing they were here, but they're never to be found
Then of your pain, and loses of the past
The horrid feelings that you thought wouldn't last
Its like a flow of emotions, coming to your head
Reminding you of the things you most dread
Lost feeling coming back to haunt you
You know these memories must be true
You punch the screen, punch the wall
Your locked away misery coming to fall
Wishing the pain could disappear
Wishing you'd forgotten them at their premier
You scream, losing control, losing sanity
These thoughts are against humanity
Screaming, crying in pain
Wishing for all of the thoughts that kept me sane

*-Sky-*
I didn't know what category this would actually go in

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mo

    Sounds like you've got a lot of pent up feelings that need to get out. This is a good way to start letting them out. If you have no one to talk to - write. Just let it all come flowing out and help you feel better. If you cant talk to someone, maybe write to them - its easier. Hope things get better at home and hope you learn to realise sometimes things happen and they're not anyone's fault at all. Espeically not yours.

    Mo
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Everyone has their different opinions of what a great poem is, and well this is my opinion of one. i don't think it deserves anything less than a 5. great job love.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittini

    Great emotion, really loved the way they were expressed, wording great seemed bumpy to me in spots but thats me over all really good! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Nicely written, good vocab, great rhyme, deep, full of emotion, a definite 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    Wow.
    thats a really good poem i like how you showed all of that emotion.. I really like the format of it also all together just agreat poem keep it up.
    5/5