I love this poem! plz keep it up...

Aw it's a great poem, very emotion. I wish you made it longer :) I wish my ex feels the same way as you..

Anyway flow was smooth, well done.

You have one mistake in your poem xD
Can we rekindel (are) love?
It should be 'our' :)

Our love once shined bright as the sun,
But it's fading like the stars in the night sky.
^^I really adore those two lines.

Keep up the good work!