Sometimes

by CHOKE   Jun 18, 2007


We're not all perfect,
So let's not pretend.
Because sometimes things just happen,
And sometimes we can't win.

We all have our battles.
Sometimes different, sometimes the same.
Sometimes we just can't help it,
The fact that we're just disasters that everyone blames.

Piece by piece,
We try to figure out who we are.
Sometimes we get close,
But sometimes we're just too far.

Life isn't always easy,
Sometimes it's just one big mistake.
But we have a choice,
Do we give or do we take?

We can choose,
We all have voices.
Life is tough,
And sometimes we make the wrong choices.

But let's not lie,
Let's not pretend.
Somehow, someday, sometime,
This world is going to end....

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  • 14 years ago

    by ChallengexEverything

    Excellent work :) kept me interested , had nice flow and rhythem and its very true.

    Good job :)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jenna grace

    I must agree with xbeyond helpx's comment.
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow, this poem is so true! I loved reading it!

    Piece by piece,
    We try to figure out who we are.
    Sometimes we get close,
    But sometimes we're just too far.

    ^^^I think that was my favorite stanza!

    But the rest was ((amazing)) too!
    Nicely penned
    Great to read
    It's for sure a
    5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dead Is The New Alive

    Wow this poem was great and i love reading it
    carly

  • 16 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    Piece by piece,
    We try to figure out who we are.
    Sometimes we get close,
    But sometimes we're just too far.

    ^ i really like this stanza. it is something i have be reflecting on lately. i like the rythm 5/5

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