Comments : If I could.

  • 16 years ago

    by Krysten

    Amazing. i loved it. so beautiful, so well rhymed. simply wonderful. kinda an old out done topic, but it feels as if it has come from the heart, therefore putting an essence into it, that makes it such a great read. please keep up the work, i look forward to reading more

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. it was awesome, i loved it, you've got so much talent 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Great poem.... i felt true love in every line ...
    nice work 5/5:) I love it !!!.Your friend *Melody*

  • 16 years ago

    by MuddinGirl

    Oh My God! That was the sweetest I have ever read. The words I could tell come straight from your heart. You are great. I wish I was the woman you wrote that for. I almost cried just reading it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Beautiful poem.
    So sweet.
    Love the message at the end.
    Beautiful piece of writing.
    Loved reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You are a romantic. Thank the Lord for romantic people!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn Davis

    You've caught the essence of love within this piece!

  • 16 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Very beautiful and well done rhyming. I can't stop smiling during reading this poem. Excellent! You are the best! I meant it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Very beautiful and well done rhyming. I can't stop smiling during reading this poem. Excellent! You are the best! I meant it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marissa Marzano

    Oh my goshh
    im lost for words
    that literally touched my heart
    the best poem i have read so far
    you have more passion in your poetry than i do
    haha
    absolutly beautiful.

    Marissa

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned. It flowed well and conveyed such a sweet message to your love...Nicely done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabrielle

    Whoever you wrote this for is very lucky to have such love.... 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    Wow, so i'm new to your poetry, but i'm loving it. you have such an expressive voice and convey it in such a soft, melodic way. it's truly beautiful. thanks so much for sharing!

  • 15 years ago

    by PassionCourageTriumph

    This was so pretty. It gave me chills. Beautiful. I don't know much about poetry so I can't give you an expert comment about how "these words worked great with these thoughts..." or what not but I can say that you are amazing. Great job.
    ~Kayla

  • 11 years ago

    by blazingSapphire

    Wow...
    wow...
    she is lucky whoever this is for.. beautiful romantic poem ..like..wow..
    "This is something you'll never be without,
    Whether you are near or far,
    For it is a simple but precious gift...
    My love is where you are."
    ^_^