Great poem it really has alot of detail i love that keep writing 5/5

Ah, that was so cute :). i loved your choice of words, brilliant write love. keep up the great work :) 5/5.

Super gitje :D
Really super :D
But it allways is when u post something :D
xxx

I liked it =]

This is cute
haha yes i know what you mean
&& yes ur lucky to have fofund that boy
haha 5/5
<3jess

How adorable. This piece endears me completely, and I also find it rather cute. Even though I haven't been in a relationship before, still I can relate because someone cares for me too. :) Yesh, a friend... or a loved-one! =3 Hah, I'm babbling now. OK, nice work, sweetie.

This is beautiful indeed dear. You managed to write it with nice rhymes. Great work. Keep up the spirit.

Awww..i luv this poem..its a really sweet poem but i think tht saviour is spelled wrong..i think it just could b me! but a 5/5

Oh dear how cute!! =) I luv this poem. I wish I had found the man of my dreams =( ur a lucky girl.

What a sweet poem.
Yes, I think I know what you mean.

" Making me a flower, when I used to be the seed. "

Love that line.
Glad you found that special guy.
Take care

Aww.. I love the repetition :) in the end it was effective :D

I really adore this line
'Making me a flower, when I used to be the seed.'
^^I think it was powerful

Anyway flow was smooth, I really enjoyed reading it :) good job

5/5!

Wow. it was beautifully written, the flow was great, the structure was good, and over all. i just loved it. 5/5

Awwww..another sweet poem...

and i know exactly what you mean... =]

great poem!

5/5

~Michelle~

Nice poem u have here i give it a 5/5

Wow, that was great.. when i was readin, i never realized how many things you could use to describe a guy (like in the first and last stanza) brilliant! i love this poem! very cute
and keep up the great work
5/5

Wow! that was awesome! great job ur really talented :-]take care..xoxoxox

Wow
omg
this is so sweet.
i loved it!!
the first stanza is my favourite. it made me want to read on.
"making me a flower, when i used to be the seed"
definitely my favourite line though.
i love ur similies and metaphors.
brilliant!!

Awww very good I loved the style this poem is great and showed a lot of deep and good emotion nice wonderful job
5/5
kaila