Comments : Penny Avenue

  • 16 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Wow, I love this poem sweetheart.
    Is Penny Avenue an actual place there?
    Or is it just a place you made up for the poem?
    It's really good. you've always been such a good writer.
    Love you babyz.
    xo

    -SJG

  • 16 years ago

    by Ben

    Penny Avenue isabout a girl, whose last name is Penny, i just used the street as a metaphore as to the relationship she and I experience. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Hey Ben,
    You're such a fantastic writer. I really don't know where you get all you metaphores and put them all together so well. Beautiful work (as usual).
    Love Greta x

  • 16 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    I love the part of the chocolate dollars melting under her feet. You created a very lonely feel in this poem and it's almost haunting. I love it.

    5/5