Tell me how does it feel

by The Poetic Child   Jun 18, 2007


Tell me how does It feel
To know that you've killed me
To know that I'm gone X2

Tell me how does it feel..

Tell me how could you do this, you see this man here
he stands with a UN-broken heart that stands so clear
You see him holding your hands, you see him smile
This is the kinda guy you hold on for awhile
(how does it feel)

he bought you a necklace he bought you a ring
you made this man so happy, that he could even sing
you went out late at night having fun with your friends
this dude sat at home, writing poems till the end

he keeps writing his lyrics telling him of his love
saying "C'mon baby, its you I cant get enough"
endless nights he's thinking about you
endless days where its just all about you

Tell me how does It feel
To know that you've killed me
To know that I'm gone X2

Tell me how does it feel..

To know that you've killed this guy who loved you so
Why did you play him like that, and then let him go
you knew he was fragile you knew he truly cared
but you didn't listen, its his heart you tared
(how does it feel)

You told him you loved him, you said you need him
But that wasn't the case, so its pain you feed him
you cheated and played, you stomped and you lied
How does it feel, to know his hearts been fried

how could you do this, he never did anything wrong
He just loved you to his ability, always singing a song
He always cared he always loved to his ability
you were his rock his spine, and his stability

Tell me how does It feel
To know that you've killed me
To know that I'm gone X2

Tell me how does it feel..

To see him walk at the end of this building with no hope
To see him strangled and tangled wrapped in rope
that is tied around his neck and he's so ready to go
with a note pinned on his jacket.."I love you more then you know"
(how does it feel)

*chocking*

Listen to him choke, as he grabs air through his throat
You can see his pain in eyes, But you just don't know
How much suffering you caused him, by your action
This is pain you don't understand, you cant imagine

The pain this kid went through, trying to make you glee
he tried so hard, to give you a life that you live happily
but you just broke him so bad, how could you cheat
Its not even yourself you hurt, its him you beat

Tell me how does It feel
To know that you've killed me
To know that I'm gone X2

Tell me how does it feel.....

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  • 15 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    Hey man thats really deep.
    the thing is, I can really relate.
    You did a beautiful job expressing ur emotion and the flow. I luv u writing , thanx for sharing 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by robin milford

    Wow this is deep david I love it

  • 15 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Full of emotions.i liked it.
    **harlea

  • 16 years ago

    by Cliche Fairytale Ending

    Really good

  • Thats really good! i mean it. xoxo