Comments : Tell me how does it feel

  • 16 years ago

    by Denise

    What sparked this?

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis sad how some people are huh? the same thing jus happened to me a few weeks back, still broken up about it, but these are great lyrics david, really enjoyed reading it, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    David, Again this was great. You are truely talented with music and these lyrics were strong deep and powerful. I love the emotion you are able to portray with such beauty. Well done on writing this a 5/5 as you truely deserve it. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfection

    Hey man this was a very good song. Nice flow and structure and a very good chorus... Say man why don't you find a nice beat and do a vocal version on this? Im confident that it would be great ...

    Keep writing man since it is in your nature =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Simply amazing. I like the emotions it in! Flow was smooth and I like the structure of the poem/song.

    5/5! all the way.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    How poignant. Verily, this was written with much passion and intensity - enough to blow me away.
    A tear-jerking write.
    I hope you all the best and take care.
    Keep on writing!

    Debbie (^^,)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    Nice song. I like it a lot. It shows well that suffering is something people do but it goes unrecognized and unappreciated.

  • Thats really good! i mean it. xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Cliche Fairytale Ending

    Really good

  • 15 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Full of emotions.i liked it.
    **harlea

  • 15 years ago

    by robin milford

    Wow this is deep david I love it

  • 15 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    Hey man thats really deep.
    the thing is, I can really relate.
    You did a beautiful job expressing ur emotion and the flow. I luv u writing , thanx for sharing 5/5