You Had Me From Hello.

by Ashley Ann   Jun 18, 2007


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This is a title contest poem that I made, enjoy!
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Every day you walk by me
You continue to try and make me smile
Every day you talk to me.
You make my days all worth while

Your presence glows like a neon light
Such charm you have, such manners.
You try to impress me with all of your might.
So swift and graceful, a love enchanter.

So much charisma and individuality.
Romanticizing me so flawlessly, my heart skips a beat.
You tell me I am intelligent and very pretty.
Then you stroke my hair, careful not to invade my mete.

Such morals you have, you astonish me.
But why you continue to awe me, I do not know.
Haven't you been told, can you not see?
....You had me from hello.

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Definition of mete: A line, boundary, or limit.
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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a good poem I liked the flow and the words were well placed. The flow was good aand it stayed true to the title good job Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Exceptionally word choice excellent show of raw emtions, the flow was absoultly flawless, and it is well penned. Perfect write, and an excellent read, keep up the good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Absolutely beautiful poem. Full of emotion. I can tell how much that person means to you. I simply love the third stanza. The rhyming was spot on and not over done and the vocab was good. Great job.
    Alex

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh, this was such a great romantic poem with great emotion, i like the way you simply telling a person what they mean to you. the best part of this poem that i really enjoyed was the word neon light and how u use it as a methopher.
    honestly this was one of the most sweet poem i ever read in P&Q, keep it up dear.

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