Some Day

by Sara   Jun 19, 2007


I don't know how to describe this feeling
That I get whenever you are close
You tend to send my heart reeling
You're the one I want the most

You walk by me and don't even know
How much you really mean to me
I try to not let everything show
Because I know you and I will never be

My friends say "That guy is a jerk!"
But everytime I see those eyes
I think that things might work
But I'm just telling myself lies

How can I like you so much?
If we never even spoke
I want to feel that soft, sweet touch
Who am I kidding with this joke?

It's hard to know you'll never
Like a girl who's like me
I don't know if I could ever
Change what you see

I hope one day
You will realize what counts
And its not the way
You look on the out

Someday I hope you see
That the person who was waiting all along
Was me

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  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Strong feelings for someone you can't possibly have. Been there. But don't worry I believe that there is always a reason there is always that day, when it comes and you meet that guy you'll spend the rest of your life with. Just remember that without certain mistake or breakups in your life you would have never met that wonderful person. I think everyone has a path and a purpose, just some parts of it are harder than others. Great Write 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney

    This piece was really good, because it's something I think a lot of people can relate to. I definitely can. I love how you portray emotions, in this piece. Great job. 5/5

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This was an outstandingly great poem! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was so good.the imagery was good and the flow was even better.
    and thank you for the comment on mine.
    best wishes
    and take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    Thank you. You again brought my emotions and thoughts right into this poem as so many others have. The rhyming and usage of imagry are very well put.

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