Comments : Citizenly Valor

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It really felt like a song lyrics and it can be a great one I think..bnecause the wording and tyhe topic is good at this masterpiece
    And 'In love I trust.' reminded me of 'In God We Trust'
    Keep it up,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. it's so great!! The ending was amazing for me..
    Good Work! =]
    --Viola

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I really enjoyed this, is seemed very song like while reading, very nice job!