A very dramatical poem... suicide because of a broken heart... It rhymes very well... the rain was a nice trick for a dramatic enviroment... works like an amplifier... Ending was good since the titel is mentioned ... It leaves a strong effect...
Oh man! Great write Bryan! I love it, all of it; the words, the flow, the way it felt to read...perfect! I really loved how you put the title in the last line, and how you used rain and moon light for the dramatic effect. Keep it up!
Wow?....Nice poem...It's very emotional and very to the point. It's very sad actually...and its got so much feeling in it. I loved the "The tear drops on my guitar" sentence very much, like a lot of other people who commented above me. It's a beautiful write...really/...
A different piece from you too me I found this to be a different style you have taken up from you other recent poems and I really loved it. The two line stanzas were really effective in the two lines you held so much beautifully sad emotions. Again Bryan a piece of amazement viewed in my eyes. Well done ~mel
another amazingly beautiful poem!
i could really relate to this... i felt the sadness she felt... i knew what she was going through, why she was doing what she was.
the flow and rhymes were perfect (as always)
the is definately goin into my faves