Comments : Little Heart Of Mine

  • 10 years ago

    by That One Girl

    This was awsome! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    Hey, wow this is an amazing piece of work, beautifully written and very emotional. shows true feeling which makes this a wonderful poem. keep it up!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Kat

    I like how short and simple this poem is. It works so well. It is sad, but shows a side that I believe everyone goes through. Great job! Keep writing. 5/5

    ~Kat~

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    Wow that was amazing! i loved how each stanza ended with the same line, except for the last stanza

    I will never mend
    You have no other way
    Now when will you end?
    Little life of mine

    ^i loved that, and it was filled with such emotion... 5/5 from me, and keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Your poem is greatly writen and shows great emotion. It sounds like you have been through alot in life and you can always talk to me if you want to. Great write. It shows true talent and true raw emotion. Nessa

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessica

    I loved your poem..It was very good..

  • 10 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    I like your poem, its simple but very nice, im sure that a lot of people can relate to this poem, I like it that you repeat the line: little heart of mine and that in the end you wrote little life of mine, awesome:) the flow is good so you get a 5/5 from me!
    kisses stephanie

  • 10 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    I like the repititon and the changing of it in the last line. Very nicely done. The emotion is this poem is wonderful. It screams of hurt and pain of losing someone. It's very very well written and I think everyone can relate to it. Flow and word choice is wonderful, nice rhyming. 5/5 for sure.

  • 10 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    So simple yet so amazing : ) Keep it up!!
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Great poem well written

  • 10 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    Exelent poem sorta like a song:D

  • 10 years ago

    by Lacey Rose

    Great Poem! It Was So... Outspoken.. Lol

  • 10 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Well written poem. The repitition was great. It placed emphasis on all the right parts. And the fact that you were speaking to your heart seems to point out confusion. The rhymes were well done and consistent. And the poem itself was very emotional and saddening. Great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Joey

    This is really nicely written 5/5
    great job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    You keep going away
    Then coming right back
    There's nowhere you'll stay
    Little heart of mine

    aaah that was such a nice writing style i loved the way you have expressed your feelings. great job
    and i m giving you 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    That's a really good little poem! 5/5! Keep it up!
    Sarah xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Perfection

    Quite a well written poem... The rhyming is very good and the fact that you end each stanza with the same line that is equivalent to the title makes it even better....
    I don't think that you go off track in any part of the poem so to be honest I see no flaw worth mentioning at all

    A very good poem indeed =)

  • 10 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Beautiful written, nice flow.
    Enjoyed reading it.

  • 10 years ago

    by mrsmoore

    That is so sad!!
    it's beautiful at the same time.
    very well written!!

  • 10 years ago

    by katy

    Yer i like this poem :) ur gd at writin poems keep it up love it! x