Your poem is greatly writen and shows great emotion. It sounds like you have been through alot in life and you can always talk to me if you want to. Great write. It shows true talent and true raw emotion. Nessa
I like your poem, its simple but very nice, im sure that a lot of people can relate to this poem, I like it that you repeat the line: little heart of mine and that in the end you wrote little life of mine, awesome:) the flow is good so you get a 5/5 from me!
I like the repititon and the changing of it in the last line. Very nicely done. The emotion is this poem is wonderful. It screams of hurt and pain of losing someone. It's very very well written and I think everyone can relate to it. Flow and word choice is wonderful, nice rhyming. 5/5 for sure.
Well written poem. The repitition was great. It placed emphasis on all the right parts. And the fact that you were speaking to your heart seems to point out confusion. The rhymes were well done and consistent. And the poem itself was very emotional and saddening. Great job!
Quite a well written poem... The rhyming is very good and the fact that you end each stanza with the same line that is equivalent to the title makes it even better....
I don't think that you go off track in any part of the poem so to be honest I see no flaw worth mentioning at all