Comments : Little Heart Of Mine

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    5/5 great work.. got a good rhythm.. alot of emotions shown in this poem.. keep it up
    .x

  • 16 years ago

    by Dead Is The New Alive

    Wow that was great i loved it
    carly

  • 16 years ago

    by deathdealer

    Its a good poem, shows us how much strain we go through and yet we always come back

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This rather is a fine piece of work. How the heart gives burden in our lives is also how it induces a sense of relief and enlightenment within us, it is a part of our system after all...
    Lovely work, nonetheless. =]
    Keep on writing.
    all the best and take care!

    ~Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Genna

    I loved this poem. Its so sad and so true!
    Thanks for putting some of my thoughts in words

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    I loved the ending!
    that was tight
    i wasnt expecting that , i liked it alot
    im gonna give you a 5 :]

  • 16 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Tu mayri!!! kuti kamini!!

  • 16 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    SowiIiIIiIii jus mad at u.. u kno im ere fr u!! its a great poem ovusli jus lyk al the res bt nex tym tlk to me!!! oh n stay strng xmwahx

  • 16 years ago

    by illalwaysloveyou

    I like it. Its unique and really good.

  • 16 years ago

    by SweetElectric

    That was brilliant! i absolutely loved it! so sad but so ... beautiful! 5/5!!

    xo
    maria

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats very good and i like the 2 different views, its very good well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by x l0v3 y0u x

    Rather goood little confusing but li like the use of how you keep repeting the fact of your talking to that "little heart of mine"

    veryy goodd!

    NuffLoveBabe.. <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Interesting, i like it, great job.

  • Kool....it does make sense...alot of sense. keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    I loved how casual you were talking like it is really common for you. I know it is for me. But what I loved most was that your little heart spoke back. This poem was great. Keep it up.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by *Senorita*

    Very nice peom. yeah man i understand it. lovely . good job =]

    jess xx