Suffer

by Beautiful Disaster   Jun 20, 2007


"It's your turn to feel the pain"
I softly whisper into you ear,
as i thrust the knife brutally into your heart.
I embrace the sound of your blood curdling screams,
an uncontrollable excitement over takes my body,
as you gasp for air and beg for help.
I sit, watch, and wait as you slowly suffer.
For the gift of death I hand you with pleasure and this memory I will forever treasure!

=]
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  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYBXBE

    I love it... I know the pain it's amazing =]

  • 16 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    That was very deep. i hope you never do anything like that, but the poem got you a 5.0 from me. keep up the good work.

    MBHD

  • 16 years ago

    by CrossMyHeartAndHopeToDie

    Its .... somethings, i like the =] at the end tho, i wont say cute cuz its not, but is diff. not bad, just diff. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by beautifulybroken

    Wow thats so powering...i love it!!

  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    Your words say it all i just can't describe my feelings, you have said it all in a very powerful way ,keep up the good work 5/5

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