Comments : Ol' Blighty

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Haha. I liked this one. For some reason I thought is was cute and funny. I don't know why. The rhymes made sense, but sometimes it seemed slightly forced.

  • 10 years ago

    by Birgit

    I agree with kitty =P It had something funny to it =)

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    Indeed, I think some of the lines need tightening up to augment the flow. Nevertheless, reading this piece quite amuses me, indeed. It rather was a fine piece of work. =] Keep it up. all the best and take care.

  • 10 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Good job you kept it short and simple yet not....which is a good thing loll

    laura-

  • 10 years ago

    by Chemistry

    I don't know if it's supposed to be funny- but it made me laugh... lol, great work!

  • 10 years ago

    by rene

    Well id have to agree with them, it did make me laugh, but it was also alitlle...wel...forced, like you tried to hard. just let go man, it will flow as it comes.

  • 10 years ago

    by Steph

    I agree with the above comments...it seemed really upbeat and happy. I enjoyed it!

  • 10 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Amusing and cute, but do you really need to express your love for big breasts? Plus, that isn't very true. I've been to England many a time. Haha, ok...nice writing. I give you an A for effort (joking).

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by jason

    Haha great poem i liked it = ] 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by godislove

    Cute

  • 10 years ago

    by beauty

    Hahah funny. ;) good on ya