Comments : Phantom of my Heart

  • 10 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Wow.. simply amazing..
    "He grabbed me and we kissed
    Despite my will, I could not resist.
    He stole my heart and left me there
    So next time you hear a cry, beware"
    that would have to be my fave stanza.. i like this poem alot.. i think its cos i can relate to sum of the feelingz u hv shown in it..
    definetly a 5/5
    dont stop writing.. ur good! =]]
    .x

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh, wow this was really a great poem with was written greatly. i really liked the style and the word choice.
    you are a talented writer, keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Omg totally incredible it is now a fav keep it up

    laura
    p.s. yay another texan

  • 10 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    AHHH! I can't explain how much I loved it, the dissapearing man and the quickness of the whole experiance, freakin' five thumbs up!

    Ganna have to find some more people to lend with thumbs, but you'll get them; you deserve 'em.

    With love,
    ~Richi~

  • 10 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Wow. This is an amazing piece. It portrayed your feelings really well. You rhyming was pretty good and consistent the whole way through. I loved the faint resigned feel to the last stanza. Great job. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Mel

    Good poem...it was kind of creepy! the rhyme was really good. i loved the last stanza...it like brought it all together. good work!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Impulse

    Very good... I simply loved it =).. Had a nice flow to it.. and I love rhyming poems ^_^

  • 10 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    Good rhyming it seemed that you didn't force it to either.It left me in an impulse the good kind.=D

  • 10 years ago

    by Mo

    I think this sounds perfect the way it is - dont know why you want to change your rhym for slowly - I think it fits what you've got. :)

    Mo

  • 10 years ago

    by Rodolfo

    I love your poem hope u keep with your talent.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mr M

    Nice

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was awesome, you have talent. you kept me captured with your words and imagery, a great write.
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 10 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    I really liked it. It was different than the other love poems I have read. I gave it a 5/5. It had a nice flow.

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    What a lovely penned.....so romantic yet heartfelt emotions written, "Love was the only one who stayed. Love wanted to persevere until the last possible moment. Knowledge smiled with great Wisdom and answered, "Because only Time is capable of understanding how great Love is." Beautiful done! you've a gift that no many have, keep them coming, take care, Best wishes from west, Bert.

  • 10 years ago

    by S R P

    When I read the title of this poem, I thought to myself, "If this poem is as intruiging as the title, it should be really good." And I was right. Great piece!

  • 9 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Amazing!! have you seen phantom of the opera? this poem reminds me of that play!!

  • 9 years ago

    by damont

    Lol i looked at this poem earlier today nice poem it speaks for itself i can't say much but keep writing. i do though like the way you described things and the way you worded it. those were good.

  • 9 years ago

    by DirgeVenustas

    Sexeh! Awsome, keep up the exalent work!

  • 9 years ago

    by AJ

    One word...beautiful, you did a great job simply amazing 10/5

  • 9 years ago

    by AJ

    One word...beautiful, you did a great job simply amazing 10/5