Wow.. simply amazing..
"He grabbed me and we kissed
Despite my will, I could not resist.
He stole my heart and left me there
So next time you hear a cry, beware"
that would have to be my fave stanza.. i like this poem alot.. i think its cos i can relate to sum of the feelingz u hv shown in it..
definetly a 5/5
dont stop writing.. ur good! =]]
Wow. This is an amazing piece. It portrayed your feelings really well. You rhyming was pretty good and consistent the whole way through. I loved the faint resigned feel to the last stanza. Great job. :)
What a lovely penned.....so romantic yet heartfelt emotions written, "Love was the only one who stayed. Love wanted to persevere until the last possible moment. Knowledge smiled with great Wisdom and answered, "Because only Time is capable of understanding how great Love is." Beautiful done! you've a gift that no many have, keep them coming, take care, Best wishes from west, Bert.