Very good i love it very depressive but i like it alot 5/5 keep it up
laura

Lovely as always ;p

Hhm. I like how you treated anerexia and bulemia like people. if some clueless person read it, they wouldve thought you meant friends. Also there are a few areas that you could capitalize and add apostrophes too.

Your not the one I blame
I hope you dont take it that way
im sorry I couldnt be stronger
when they came my way

this caught me and i just had to read it again for how amazing it sounded. loved this stanze out of the rest. loved the poem penned beautifully 5/5