Sad poem:[

Thats a really original poem - so sad, but really intrigueing at the same time. the way its written is beautiful too - i dont always write free form but i wish more people would

That is a really powerful and moving poem. sadly beautiful, it was written with a lot of emotion. Good work.

Very passionate!!
sad...
6/5

Freaky O_o"
but very well written

**you still question who...
who?
WHO?
WHO?!** i liked the way you wrote that, seems, as the person starts normal, then finishes by shouting.

split personality, i really didnt think that would be the suject, when i read the title. the story line just perfectly flowed along. n_n