Oh wow i love it...you have my vote ^_^

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Sad but beautiful, I have tears in my eyes...
Truly touching poem.
I'm so sorry for your lost, I know how it feels to lose someone who was close to you.
Keep writing, 5/5 for this one.

Great poem, very creative I must say. Just that sometimes the flow was off. Great job though, keep it up.

This one says what I was feeling while my grandfather was in the hospital, save the idea of the Teddy Bear itself, for it was a lion. My
Grandfather died last September and I last saw him on my birthday. If you don't mind I'd like to borrow this.

5/5

It touches me deep.
A very sad poem with such deep emotions.
Take care

My heart goes out to you for your loss, your grandad would be proud of you for the poem you wrote may he always shine forever , I am thinking of you .

My regards ; My heart goes out to you . This poem touched me, and I'm not just saying that . You did a swell job with this, and I think you picked the perfect title . The flow never roughed out, and the rhymes were nice choices .

Best wishes .
..__MiNDYY

Wow this poem hit me deeply...very moving and im sorry for your loss..i can only hope that time can heal your pain..great poem..5/5

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Very good good poem i love it!
5/5

Omg... this is really good

First off, i am so sorry about your grandfather. my grandma passed away some time ago and we were really close. i love how the first and last stanza are the same, it really gives the reader an idea of how dramatic it really is and doesn't let them forget it. very well written!

Wow so sad
yet so powerful,
keep it up!
-Lisa

I like a lot this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.I've lost two of my best friends ,too,but I'm sure that there,in Heaven they are happy.So you're grandpa.You have done an excellent work.Congratulations.Best regards,Michelle xxx 5/5 for sure ;)*hugs*

Sissy i love u and the poem was amazeing just like u ilu so much ur my one and only sis
i love u =]
--Harley --XX--

Our bodies are our cages. Although we have boundaries physically, our souls can be expressed through our minds. Our souls reach out in every action, thought, emotion...and beyond. There are no limits.

Keep sharing your thoughts with the world, it feels better.
XOXO

Wow this is an amazing poem! im so sorry about your grandfather and i hope you are okay. you def. have my vote 5/5 :) very emotional poem.

This poem was really good.. you almost put me to tears.. because it made me think.. that it is almost a year since my grandpa passed away as well. This poem was very well written and very emotionally-filled. I'm sorry to hear about your grandpa.. but at least he's in a better place now.. and isn't spending time in the hospital. Take care. 5/5.

It's great, that's all I have to say.