I really like it! It sad how some people's lives are like that, unable to fix their life or not wanting to until it's too late.

"Or at least until her watch reads 8 and her shift
starts again.
Under the same lights and under the same addiction"

Wow I found this to be a really unique poem, because not only is it filled with honesty but it is very frank, and you didnt hold back in your emotions portrayed through the poem! It seems that some people will live out the same routine, day in day out for the rest of their lives and some people will break free from that. The lives that we lead, what we amount to, is it what we were really destined for? Wonderful poem!

Take Care

Oh and by the way, Im definetly going to add this poem to my favourites list. The very first ive added.