Awww me like very much it is going under my favs it brought back mems and now they wont go away so sad but very strong feeling 5/5
laura

Hey cool poem, really enjoed reading it, there was a lot of depth in it, well done x

I really like this poem! there's just something about it that screams "amazing!"

it's almost like a song..!

5/5! great job

Loved the poem it was really great. i especially loved "Memories cover my mind at this lonely night,
Heat my soul and blacken my eyes
Will stay up until sun spreads its first light;
I will be repeating yesterday with photographs.
'Forever'"
it was very heart felt.. and thanks for the comments on my poems but i think yours are like two- three times better

Honey this is a very special poem for me and I read it with all my heart. I love ur poems loabi. This piece is morethan worth 5/5. tc hunny

Honey this is a very special poem for me and I read it with all my heart. I love ur poems loabi. This piece is morethan worth 5/5. tc hunny

This is a great poem laura, great vocab, flow was smooth. I also love the title

Hitting my fingers to my decrepit guitar to play our song,
My soul taking me back to live again our first kiss
^ I love those 2 lines! keep it up

And also the opening line was excellent, well done

5/5!

Wow. thought it was great. memories never go away. my fave lines were.
I cannot feel the pain since you completely lost my heart,
Became a motionless within a coward inside

loved them lines. the flow was great the poem was just awesome. 5/5

Whoa. this is excellent. it was described so well. i loved the last line of each line, how it melded in with the poem.

5/5 for sure. david

Once again, a very well earned 5/5
i can relate to all of your poems.. very very good!
.x

Oh my gosh this is amazing : ] Flow was very good and your descriptions were excellent. Your choice of words drew me within the poem. Very good job on this one

-=Claps.=- Another amazing piece of writing, by m'dear friend, Laura. :]
It's truly amazing, honey.
I'm in complete lack of better words at the moment.
But it was amazing.
Flow..description..
Perfect; flawless.
Those are the only words in my mind.
Take care, love.
xxxx

-Heather

I really dig this one man, good job

I loved how it read.
Beautiful. Yet filled with lonliness.
So much depth.
This peice was captivating from the first words.

Well done laura.
Elaine.x

Great poem. you are a great writer, keep up the good work. 5/5

ITZ STR8 HOMII

I like it lol great structure too and flows nicely

I loved this poem so much emotion as always your poems paint a very real picture for the reader the only thing I belive could imporve this poems would be to make the sentances a little shorter with a couple more stanzas.

Excellent poem. Great idea to have the "Forever" and "For today" etc. Those were very effective. The flow in this poem was excellent and the rhyming was flawlessy done.

-Shannon <3

I loved this. it's great. 5/5