That is the deal Candy(Acrostic)

by Fsams   Jun 25, 2007


Tears have dried for a new start
Hopes have flickered in my heart
And its so beautiful and true
Today I get because of you

I love and long to see you dear
So lost in you, I feel you here

Time will tell how close we are
Happy I am, away so far
Epoch-making honey you are

Dazzled I am to see your face
Evermore green I feel my days
A helping hand you're indeed
Loving you honey, I'm in need

Care & cure is what you give
A life with you is now I live
Never will I break my vow
Dwell in me, care me more
Your love will forever grow

Written by Fsams
24/07/2007
Sunday 22:09

Dedicated to a special poet.

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  • 16 years ago

    by alwayssofresh16

    I enjoyed reading this on and I can relate... I love your work

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I have always felt there are two kinds of poems for a poet one for the general public the other for his friends and family that should be in a personal nature I think this poem is the ladder of the two. I liked it as a whole but some poems should be for the eyes of those who really can draw from your emotions Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Great poem.It flowed very well until it came to 'candy' where it got a little choppy.Still a great read though.Keep it up,-Miranda

  • 16 years ago

    by LovelyDivine

    I love your emotion in your poems
    great work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    Great poem i like iy ^_^5/5

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