Comments : That is the deal Candy(Acrostic)

  • 10 years ago

    by x Mo x

    That was great. I rarely get to read acrostic poems that rhyme and have a very steady beat. This one did both! I couldn't find any error, and it is very beautiful. Keep up the great work!

    ~Morgan~

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    You're so sweet hun..I really didn't understand to who you were writing when you told me last night hun...I just woke up and saw you posted a new poem..and when I looked at the title..I was like woo!...Thanks hunny
    Varah loabivan
    Take care,
    Your sweetheart
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Excellent, very well written. Good flow. Overall it was a wonderful read.
    5/5
    .x

  • 10 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Very awesome poem!! the flow wuz good and the emotion was there a 5/5!

  • 10 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    That was lovely. I liked the flow and rhyme. 5/5.

    Ravyn

  • 10 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Wow Fsams this is just flawless. Nicely written with the best flow. K33P UP

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Fasams
    Great Arcostic. Even better when I saw it was for Laura :) Excellent piece.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was such a great acrostic poem with a sweet and beautiful dedication to someone who seems as though they mean so much to you. Enjoyed reading this from start to finish. Well done on the great write.~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by Cassandra

    Very well written and inspirational. This poem definetly had a great flow and lines! I could feel the love almost pouring out.5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    This piece was quite attractive and endearing. I find it rather delightful to read, too. And I'll commend you for writing in a formed poetry, which I dearly am fond of reading and writing as well. How such a rebirth of a lost love induces a sense of warmth and fuzziness inside of me is adorably thrilling. I only have petty complaints with the lack of rhythm and craggy flow which, like I've said, are trivial matters. A nice tribute, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing and God bless! ~Marian

  • 10 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great acrostic.
    Nice rhyming, and the right words.
    Loved reading it.
    Great work

  • 10 years ago

    by Kara P

    That was so sweet! Good flow, it was flawless.
    I loved it!
    :)
    Kara

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I loved this poem, it was short, sweet and to the point, the flow was great and the words were so heartfelt. Love really is the most amazing thing this world has to offer, Excellent poem 5/5 GG23

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Beautiful love poem.
    You expressed emotions very good, and I like the flow of the whole piece.
    My favorite lines are:
    -Dazzled I am to see your face
    Evermore green I feel my days-
    Great work, keep up.
    5/5 from me, you really deserved it

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought that this
    was a very beautiflu poem
    and a wonderful
    acrostic

    it flowed perfect
    and the rhyming was
    flawless
    and never seemed forced

    5/5 well deserved

  • 10 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    I never read an acrostic poem that rhymed cause it seems very difficult. But that just shows what an amazing poem this is. Keep it up!

    Tears have dried for a new start
    Hopes have flickered in my heart

    My fave lines ^^

  • 10 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    Flow went nicely, although im not really a fan of the usual aabb format. but well written. bumpy in the last stanza. words seem to fumble. other than that, good work my freind.

    (:

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wonderful job./.. the flow is great and the emotion is stron... very enjoyuable read.. keep it up 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Krysten

    Very nice. i trulry enjoyed it. yet at the same time you can tell it was written for someone in particular...and with what seems amazing ease you pulled it off. again very well done.5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Beautiful acrostic poem. It's really hard to flow in this type of poetry but you were able to do it, well done. I really find it sweet! keep writing!