That was great. I rarely get to read acrostic poems that rhyme and have a very steady beat. This one did both! I couldn't find any error, and it is very beautiful. Keep up the great work!

~Morgan~

You're so sweet hun..I really didn't understand to who you were writing when you told me last night hun...I just woke up and saw you posted a new poem..and when I looked at the title..I was like woo!...Thanks hunny
Varah loabivan
Take care,
Your sweetheart
Laura

Excellent, very well written. Good flow. Overall it was a wonderful read.
5/5
.x

Very awesome poem!! the flow wuz good and the emotion was there a 5/5!

That was lovely. I liked the flow and rhyme. 5/5.

Ravyn

Wow Fsams this is just flawless. Nicely written with the best flow. K33P UP

Fasams
Great Arcostic. Even better when I saw it was for Laura :) Excellent piece.
Take Care Cindy

This was such a great acrostic poem with a sweet and beautiful dedication to someone who seems as though they mean so much to you. Enjoyed reading this from start to finish. Well done on the great write.~mel

Very well written and inspirational. This poem definetly had a great flow and lines! I could feel the love almost pouring out.5/5

This piece was quite attractive and endearing. I find it rather delightful to read, too. And I'll commend you for writing in a formed poetry, which I dearly am fond of reading and writing as well. How such a rebirth of a lost love induces a sense of warmth and fuzziness inside of me is adorably thrilling. I only have petty complaints with the lack of rhythm and craggy flow which, like I've said, are trivial matters. A nice tribute, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing and God bless! ~Marian

Great acrostic.
Nice rhyming, and the right words.
Loved reading it.
Great work

That was so sweet! Good flow, it was flawless.
I loved it!
:)
Kara

I loved this poem, it was short, sweet and to the point, the flow was great and the words were so heartfelt. Love really is the most amazing thing this world has to offer, Excellent poem 5/5 GG23

Beautiful love poem.
You expressed emotions very good, and I like the flow of the whole piece.
My favorite lines are:
-Dazzled I am to see your face
Evermore green I feel my days-
Great work, keep up.
5/5 from me, you really deserved it

I thought that this
was a very beautiflu poem
and a wonderful
acrostic

it flowed perfect
and the rhyming was
flawless
and never seemed forced

5/5 well deserved

I never read an acrostic poem that rhymed cause it seems very difficult. But that just shows what an amazing poem this is. Keep it up!

Tears have dried for a new start
Hopes have flickered in my heart

My fave lines ^^

Flow went nicely, although im not really a fan of the usual aabb format. but well written. bumpy in the last stanza. words seem to fumble. other than that, good work my freind.

(:

Wonderful job./.. the flow is great and the emotion is stron... very enjoyuable read.. keep it up 5/5

Very nice. i trulry enjoyed it. yet at the same time you can tell it was written for someone in particular...and with what seems amazing ease you pulled it off. again very well done.5/5

Beautiful acrostic poem. It's really hard to flow in this type of poetry but you were able to do it, well done. I really find it sweet! keep writing!