You're so sweet hun..I really didn't understand to who you were writing when you told me last night hun...I just woke up and saw you posted a new poem..and when I looked at the title..I was like woo!...Thanks hunny
This was such a great acrostic poem with a sweet and beautiful dedication to someone who seems as though they mean so much to you. Enjoyed reading this from start to finish. Well done on the great write.~mel
This piece was quite attractive and endearing. I find it rather delightful to read, too. And I'll commend you for writing in a formed poetry, which I dearly am fond of reading and writing as well. How such a rebirth of a lost love induces a sense of warmth and fuzziness inside of me is adorably thrilling. I only have petty complaints with the lack of rhythm and craggy flow which, like I've said, are trivial matters. A nice tribute, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing and God bless! ~Marian
Beautiful love poem.
You expressed emotions very good, and I like the flow of the whole piece.
My favorite lines are:
-Dazzled I am to see your face
Evermore green I feel my days-
Great work, keep up.
5/5 from me, you really deserved it