That was awesome, you are a very talented writer. i love acrostic poems, i only learnt how to write them a few weeks ago, but hopefully one day i will be as good as you. 5/5

This is very good. i give 5/5...o an thanx for commenting my poem innocence

Hihi =) I love this line: So lost in you, I feel you here.

But again, this poem reflects how you feel to this poet and it's so cute! =D Keep up the good work.
5/5
xxx

Awww this poem was beautiful...i really liked it....the rhyming was great ....great job!

5/5

~Michelle~

Very nicely written. u are talented. 5/5. keep up the good work.!!!

This is by far one of the best acrostic poems I have ever read! Very nicely written... and beautiful! Take care :-) LOVE THIS POEM! 5/5

This was really cute!! Sweet to the one you wrote it about.. I have always loved your poems. keep up the great work 5/5

I thought it was very good, there were a few sentences where like it was off by maybe one syllable in the rhythm, but it really overall was an impressive poem. considering i really stink at acrostics, it was a wonderful poem to me lol, i commend your efforts. 5/5 def.

This was so sweet.
The emotion's flowed from each word.
The acrosstic was written beautifully. No mistakes. It flowed excellent. The vocabulary was broad.
Well Done.
I really enjoyed it,
Elaine.

I love how you set the poem up
this is a great line "today i get because of you"
5/5

This poem was beautifully written and filled with feelings of love. The form was kept well throughout the poem, the wording and flow was outstanding. There wasn't a single line that seemed forced. Excellent job!

5/5

Sounded a little forced but not that bad. Work on your flow a little bit though. It was good though love. <3

Great poem really to the point well done :)

The very last stanza was the best and most powerful. Your beginning stanzas was a little weak, then the last two stanzas got stronger and stronger. I will be honest that I think it deserves like a 4.5 vote. But I can only choose 4 or 5. I will not vote unless you want me to.

That is so cute....I love it....Good job...I wish I could write like you....

5/5....

Greatly written. Flow is excellent and emotions are expressed very well. I don't like ending. First stanza is my favorite, it is superbly written. 5/5

A really great Acrostic...

Laura is sooooooooooo lucky.

Epoch-making honey you are

This line is the one I think that didn't flow, but otherwise a flawless poem. ^^ You're a great writer, a wonderful comment-or, and always a pleasure to read!

A beautiful peice!
Your flow was almost perfect and you show your love is beautiful.
Great job!
5/5
((Amber))

Great poem i like iy ^_^5/5