Just Like I remember (Sonnet III)

by Bryan   Jun 29, 2007


Just Like I remember (Sonnet III)

Why does it hurt so much to say goodbye?
to take back all the love that I gave her,
look the woman I love right in the eye,
and pray that I won't ever remember.

Never again get to feel her soft touch,
like those times we used to sit holding hands,
every now and then I miss them so much,
and I hope one day she will understand.

Until then my love will have to depart,
to go through life feeling nothing but pain,
writing these sonnets to my broken heart,
while siting outside in the pouring rain.

The more I pray the more I think of her
and she will be Just Like I remember.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This is truly an amazing poem.
    Its beautiful and sad... it really spoke to me.
    The rhyming is wonderful, it doesn't seem forced at all.
    This is an amazing poem... i would give it a 10 if i could!

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was a smashing piece of work. You literally took my breath away for a split second. Gee. =] Keep it up! Love, moi <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Another awesome sonnet well written like yourother ones lol good job!! and thx again for the other comment lol
    i dont like being in situations like how my poem is about lol it is complicated lol

    keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh wow.. that was really good Bryan. You have inspired me to write sonnets :) Amazing as always!

    5/5! keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marie

    OMG you have no idea how in tune with this sonnet i am... it is so beautiful.. i'vebeen aiming to write something like that since i moved and somehow u beat me to it. I am so envious. 5/5

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