Slowly Dying

by Loved In Hell   Jun 29, 2007


My dreams have gone
And terror has come to stay
Hope has been broken
And death has found a way

You think I am breathing
You think I am fine
But inside I am gasping
And losing my mind

I have been begging
I can't stand to live this way
Tears are coming down to hard
I am losing my way

I don't know what to do
I am blinded from peace
Something is inside me
I think a terrible beast

There is nothing left
But my outer shell
Death is in inside me
I am under a spell

My vision is dying
All I see now is blacked
The look on my dead face
The loving I lacked

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  • 16 years ago

    by Benjamin AmbersCry

    One word "Perfection"

  • 16 years ago

    by XBroKenXyetXHeReX

    5/5 pretty good...I love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I think this piece is related to by everyone at some point in their life. Great emotion and depth. Very powerful read. 5/5

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ryan

    Good poem, very sad. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This poem is great....the flow is perfect and the rhyming was excellent...5/5....

    and sorry about the wait on your comments.. my computer has been messed up.

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