Hey,
awesome poem, I think your girlfriend is lucky to have you, you're an amazing writer everything in this poem is good, although I must say that the beginning was a bit cliche, but thats just me, I dont have a favorite stanza because I like all of them, keep up the good work and 5/5 from me!
kisses stephanie

Again David you have wrote such a beautiful deep and heartfelt piece of poetry. The flow is always spot on and I found the emotion to be powerful giving such a touching effect. I'm sure many people can relate to this poem but none will truely understand how you feel except yourself. Well done yet again on creating such an amazing poem. ~mel

Beautiful poem so sweet

Such a stunning, poetic success. I was rather delighted in reading it, and was fairly amused by what you've stated that you're "...heart can finally talk". =] Simply terrific! I wish you both happiness and fulfillment in you journey through Life and Love. Heh.

Debbie cakes~

Nice job. one of your best ones, and on of my favorites. kristy must be a very lucky girl! keep up the good work, and remember to keep the faith!!!

MBHD

Great poem a couple spelling errors but the quality of the poem is wonderful great job!!! i can feel the love:)
i hope the girl i love and i can be like this also:):)

good job

keenan

I read it before and didnt comment, my bad, i thought i did but apparently i didnt, it tis an excellent poem, love the flow, cant wait for the second one, i give it a perfect 5/5!!!

God. i loved it. i can really relate to it. it was perfect! yes def. 10/10 on this. i think this is the best love poem i have ever read. good job!!!

Kristy is blessed to have you as her beloved dear friend n poet !!!!
god bless you both.

hey I'd appreciate if you go through some on my poetry n comment on my work!!!
take care