In Love...

by MaSkEdSoUl   Jun 29, 2007


Those lips,
Those eyes,
That beautiful smile,
Drives me wild.

(Gazing at you
Makes me tremble)

Butterflies in my stomach,
Knees weak,
Never ending thought of you.

Loving you is so easy,
But not having you is the hard part.

**Not good but I'm working on make it better, so its just a rough draft, tell me what you think of it Please!!**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Loruhh

    Great start, work on theflow of it though and it will be perfect!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Loruhh

    Great start, work on theflow of it though and it will be perfect!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Not one of your best but a 4/5 needs transition could you read my newest one.