Comments : In Love...

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Not one of your best but a 4/5 needs transition could you read my newest one.

  • 16 years ago

    by Loruhh

    Great start, work on theflow of it though and it will be perfect!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Loruhh

    Great start, work on theflow of it though and it will be perfect!!