Wow. this is good. wait, this is way better than good. its better than great. its so amzing i'd hav to make up a new word for it. lol ya kno, this kinda sounds like a rap. i can imagine eminem singing it. well nenyways great job.

Looks like you spent a lot of time on this poem but it was worth it =]
Excellent job the flow was good and easy to follow
5/5

I'm speechless to say the least for this poem conveys so many deep feelings and even though it was such a long one, I was totally hooked from the start till the end. You've got a lot of talent and it's a pity that you haven't written any new poems. 5/5 though from my side though I think it deserves 100/5