Comments : Love!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, flowed nicely, well written ,wording was great, you did an outstanding job on this piece, you can feel the passion in it , marvelous write, keep it up , your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Nice poem.
    Your style and the form that you have is very unique.
    5/5
    _Amber_

  • 16 years ago

    by Lynn

    It was short but so full of emotions..keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Qpid

    ***AMAZING!!*** well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    A short, sweet and a lovely poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by Michel

    Great words...beautiful poem...
    keep them coming...
    5/5
    kissssssss

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5
    Check for my new poem'favorite authors' - thanks

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    We shall be thankful to you, if we both could add each others names in our favourite list which is very much commendable and appreciated, on a friendly manner.

    Moreover,We will look your poems and will read, rate and comment therein with pleasure.... So, whenever there is a new poem, please without any hesitations let us know to enable us to read and do the needful therein.

    Awaiting for your positive answer..

    Thanking you once again,

    We,

    Luzan and Nazeer
    (joining in poem writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    VerY lovinG sentenceS yoU useD herE. mE luV yR stylE oF writinG thaT keepS mE verY joY..... 5/5

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    I love it : )

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by michael

    Wow loved the poem love how you started then went back to the origenal line almost 5/5 thanx for reading my poem