Admire

by BeautifulGwen   Jul 1, 2007


Sometimes I wonder
What people see
When they look upon a girl
Who is different

Auburn hair
Flowered lips
Sea eyes
And nice curved hips

Small waist
Stomach soft
Wavy thighs
Hands aloft

Muscled caves
Tan feet
Graceful fingers
And hands beat

These are the things
That people see,
But they don’t get
That she is beautiful
She is grand
And she has a heart
And soul just like
The rest of them

All they see
Is a girl who doesn't
Look like the skinny
Model off the cover
The athletic girl
On the field
Or the skinny curved
Girl from the mall

But the next time you
See a girl who looks
Different
Look at her beauty
And admire the way she
Walks the world

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amy Jo

    Beautiful, i can't say it any better this poem is perfect and you wrote it so good. I wish they all could read this as in boys/men.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    The message of this poem is great, and whole piece is very deep.
    You lack a flow in some parts, you should work on it a little bit.
    The ending is excellent, the last stanza is my favorite.
    4/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Yup, still lovin your poetry! lol

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    AMEN! This is a great poem. I love all your poetry. This poem I like because it is a lesson that absolutely everyone in the world need a lesson in.

  • 16 years ago

    by rene

    Wonderful, you grapsed the meaning and worked with it...hope to hear more from you.

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