A Promise

by Goran Rahim   Jul 2, 2007


Tonight,
I am handing over my soul
To a poem
Sending it to your cold room
So you can hug it
Knowing it is from me.

Look,
How your love is making me a poet
It teaches me
The meaning of beauty.
Showing me,
All I need is your two beautiful eyes in this city.

Tonight,
I am handing over my heart
To a bird
Sending it for a kiss of your lips.

Look,
How a promise is keeping me alive,
Yet
Making me sleepless.

You tell me,
When will that day come
When
The roses of the garden will smile
When
A promise will be completed
The day
When
Our lips meet..........

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  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Wow, this poem is very touching.. it made me cry.. very nice. i rate this a 5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwwww this is so sweet...it almost made me cry..all of your poems that i've read are so sweet and just have me daydreaming of what it would be like to have a guy like that...wonderful poem..5/5

    ~Michelle~

  • 16 years ago

    by barbara

    Nicely put!!! 5/5 yet another beautiful job....you are one of my fav authors!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciera

    You know I realy Liked this. It was......Nice LOL. I realy liked that

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, just wow... This piece is so deep, beautiful and full of excellently expressed emotions.
    Every line is preciously amazing.
    Second stanza is my favorite.
    I like the flow of the whole piece, too.
    Well done, 5/5 from me

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